写作是英语"输出"的临门一脚。这一页按 句子 → 段落 → 短文 三步进阶:先把一句话写对(句子升级),再把几句话排成一段(段落结构 + 连接词),最后套模板写成整篇(实用邮件 / 考试作文)。实用写作(邮件、自我介绍、简历、邀请感谢信)解决上班和生活里的真问题;考试写作(初高中记叙文书信、四六级三段式、剑桥风格段落)解决应试拿分问题。每一类都给你"结构模板 + 范文 + 折叠练习",照着套、仿着写,写完点开参考答案对照。
写作基础:句子、段落与万能句型
很多人一写英语就卡壳,不是词汇量不够,而是不知道"一句话怎么变长、一段话怎么排"。这一节给你四件最趁手的工具:句子升级(简单句怎么变并列句、复合句)、段落结构(一段里三句话各干什么活)、连接词清单(句子之间靠什么连起来)、万能句型 20 句(开头、过渡、结尾直接背了套)。
读和听是"别人给你",写作是"你往外挤"。你前面已经会读会说了,这一章先把句子和段落的骨架搭起来——别一上来就憋长文,先把一句话写对、一段话排顺。骨架正了,下一章的邮件、考试作文才套得上模板。
动笔四步:审题 → 提纲 → 初稿 → 自查
很多人一上来就写,写一半发现跑题、字数不够、时态乱。其实任何一篇英语作文,下笔前都花三分钟走这四步,比直接硬写快得多、也稳得多。
句子升级:简单句 → 并列句 → 复合句
写作想上档次,不是堆难词,而是把两三个短句用连词"粘"成长句。三级跳:简单句只有一套主谓;并列句用 and / but / so 把两个平起平坐的句子连起来;复合句用 because / when / although 等把"主句 + 从句"套起来。
三级升级模板
| 级别 | 模板 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| 简单句 一套主谓 |
主语 + 谓语(+ 宾语 / 状语) | She works in a hospital.(她在一家医院工作。) |
| 并列句 两句平级,逗号+连词 |
分句1 , and / but / so / or 分句2 | She works in a hospital, and she loves her job.(她在医院工作,而且热爱这份工作。) |
| 复合句 主句 + 从句 |
主句 + because / when / although / that + 从句 | She loves her job because she helps many patients every day.(她热爱这份工作,因为她每天帮助很多病人。) |
段落结构:一段话的"三段式"
一段像样的英语段落,不是句子随便堆,而是有分工的:第一句亮观点(主题句),中间 2-3 句给证据(支撑句:原因 / 例子 / 数据),最后一句收一下(结论句)。先把这三步记住,写段落就有骨架。
段落三步框架
常用连接词清单:句子之间靠什么连
中文靠"意思"连句,英语靠"连接词"显形。下面五类是写作里出现频率最高的连接词,每个配一句例句,挑 3-5 个背熟就够用。
| 类别 | 常用连接词 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| 递进 | besides, furthermore, in addition, what's more, moreover | The plan is cheap. Moreover, it saves a lot of time.(这个方案便宜,而且省时间。) |
| 转折 | however, but, although, on the other hand, instead | The task was hard. However, we finished it on time.(任务很难,然而我们按时完成了。) |
| 因果 | because, since, as a result, therefore, thus | It rained heavily. As a result, the match was put off.(雨下得很大,结果比赛推迟了。) |
| 举例 | for example, for instance, such as, take ... as an example | Outdoor exercise is relaxing. Take walking, for example.(户外运动让人放松,比如散步。) |
| 总结 | in short, in conclusion, to sum up, all in all, in a word | In short, small steps every day lead to big changes.(总之,每天一小步带来大改变。) |
① however 是副词,不是连词:不能像 but 那样直接连两句(× It was hard however we tried.)。要嘛用句号另起一句(It was hard. However, we tried.),要嘛加分号(It was hard; however, we tried.)。
② so / because 不要成对用:because 已经表原因,so 已经表结果,两句里留一个就够(× Because it rained, so we stayed home. → Because it rained, we stayed home.)。
③ such as 后接名词,不接完整句子:such as apples and bananas(√),不能 such as I like apples(×)。
万能句型 20 句:开头 / 过渡 / 结尾
下面 20 句职场邮件和考试作文通用,开头、过渡、结尾各占几个。先背熟,写的时候直接往主题词上套。
开头 7 句
| 1 | Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about ... | 如今,越来越多人关注…… |
| 2 | With the development of society, ... has become a common problem. | 随着社会发展,……成了普遍问题。 |
| 3 | When it comes to ..., people's opinions differ greatly. | 谈到……,人们观点不一。 |
| 4 | It is well known that ... plays an important role in our daily life. | 众所周知,……在生活中很重要。 |
| 5 | As the proverb says, " ... ". | 常言道:"……" |
| 6 | There is no doubt that ... | 毫无疑问,…… |
| 7 | I am writing to you to ... | 我写信是为了……(邮件开头) |
过渡 7 句
| 8 | First of all, we should ... | 首先,我们应当…… |
| 9 | Moreover, it is necessary for us to ... | 此外,我们有必要…… |
| 10 | However, every coin has two sides. | 然而,凡事都有两面性。 |
| 11 | For example, ... | 例如,…… |
| 12 | As a result, ... | 结果,…… |
| 13 | On the contrary, some people hold a different view. | 相反,有人持不同看法。 |
| 14 | What's more, we cannot ignore the fact that ... | 而且,我们不能忽视……这一事实。 |
结尾 6 句
| 15 | In conclusion, we should ... | 总之,我们应当…… |
| 16 | Taking all these factors into consideration, we may draw the conclusion that ... | 综合考虑,我们可以得出结论…… |
| 17 | It is high time that we took action to ... | 是我们采取行动……的时候了。 |
| 18 | Only in this way can we ... | 只有这样我们才能……(倒装句,加分项) |
| 19 | I am looking forward to your early reply. | 期待您尽早回复。(邮件结尾) |
| 20 | In a word, small efforts can make a big difference. | 总而言之,小小的努力也能带来大不同。 |
合上书,教一个完全不会英语的人:"为啥两个短句要用 but 连起来,不能各说各的?"讲明白,你才真懂。问自己三句:
- 用自己的话解释:主题句、支撑句、结论句,在一段里各干什么活?打个比方(比如像盖房子)。
- 举个反例:however 和 but 用法有啥不一样?为什么不能 "It was hard however we tried"?
- 哪里还说不清:20 个万能句里,哪几句你只会背、不会往自己的题目里套?挑一句,套你自己的事写一遍。
实用写作:邮件、自我介绍、简历、日常小作文
这一节解决上班和生活里"真要用"的四件事:英文邮件、自我介绍、简历要点、邀请/感谢类小作文。每一类都给你结构模板、一两篇范文、一个带折叠答案的练习。模板拿去就能套,范文照着读熟,练习先自己写,再点开参考答案对照。
骨架搭好了,现在上"真活"。这一章不教花架子,全是明天上班/明天面试就可能用到的东西:写邮件、介绍自己、改简历、发邀请感谢。每样都给你模板+范文+练习,先抄一遍,再把里面的名字换成你自己的。
1. 英文邮件
邮件五段式模板
| 主题 Subject | 一句话说清什么事,别空着,也别写 "Hello"。例:Leave request on Friday |
| 称呼 Salutation | Dear Ms. Chen, / Dear Sir or Madam, / Hi Tom, |
| 开头 Opening | 问候 + 写信目的:I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to ... |
| 正文 Body | 1-3 段,一段一个意思;把事情说清楚、把要求/时间点写明。 |
| 结尾 Closing | 客套 + 期待:Please let me know if ... / Looking forward to your reply. |
| 署名 Signature | Best regards, Wang Fang |
范文一:请假邮件
Subject: Leave request on Friday, Sept 20
Dear Ms. Chen,
I hope this email finds you well.
I am writing to request one day of leave this Friday, September 20. I have a doctor's appointment that cannot be rescheduled.
I have already finished this week's report, and my colleague Li Ming has agreed to cover my urgent tasks. I will check my email in case of emergencies.
Thank you for your understanding. Please let me know if you need any further information.
Best regards,
Wang Fang
中文对照:主题——9月20日(周五)请假申请。陈女士您好,见信安好。我写此信是想申请本周五(9月20日)请一天假,我有一个无法改期的医生预约。本周报告我已完成,同事李明也同意代办紧急事务,如有急事我会查看邮件。感谢理解,如需更多信息请告知。此致,王芳。
范文二:项目进展邮件
Subject: Update on the Q3 project
Dear team,
I hope this email finds you well.
This is a quick update on the Q3 project. We have completed the first two stages on schedule, and the design draft will be ready by next Monday.
However, we are facing a small delay in the testing phase. We are working overtime to catch up, and we expect to finish by the end of next week.
Please let me know if you have any questions. I will send the detailed report by Friday.
Best regards,
Zhang Wei
中文对照:主题——第三季度项目进展更新。各位好,见信安好。这是 Q3 项目的简短进展:前两阶段已按期完成,设计稿下周一前就绪。但测试阶段略有延误,我们正加班追赶,预计下周末前完成。如有问题请告知,详细报告周五前发出。此致,张伟。
Dear Mr. Smith, I am write to you tell you I am very sorry I cannot come to meeting tomorrow, because I have something to do. Give you know I will come next week. Give you.
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Subject: Apology: unable to attend tomorrow's meeting
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well.
I am writing to apologize that I will not be able to attend tomorrow's meeting, as I have an urgent matter to attend to.
I will review the meeting notes as soon as possible and catch up on any decisions made. Please let me know if there is anything I should prepare in advance.
I am sorry for any inconvenience this may cause.
Best regards,
Li Hua
改了三处典型中式英语:① "I am write to you tell you" → I am writing to ...;② "I have something to do" → I have an urgent matter to attend to;③ "Give you / Give you know" 整句删掉,换成 Please let me know / 直接陈述。
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
2. 自我介绍
自我介绍五段式
| ① 打招呼 + 姓名 | Good morning. My name is ... |
| ② 基本背景 | 来自哪里 / 毕业院校 / 什么专业:I graduated from ... majoring in ... |
| ③ 相关经历/能力 | 一段经历或一项专长,给个小例子。 |
| ④ 为什么适合 | 对应岗位/场合说一句:I am a good fit because ... |
| ⑤ 收尾感谢 | Thank you for your time. / I'm looking forward to ... |
范文:职场面试版
Good morning. My name is Liu Yang, and I am very glad to be here today.
I graduated from Nanjing University in 2020, majoring in Computer Science. After graduation, I worked as a software engineer for three years, mainly on web applications.
In my last job, I led a small team to rebuild the customer service system, which cut response time by thirty percent. I enjoy solving problems and working closely with people.
I am applying for this position because it matches my skills and long-term plan. I believe I can bring real value to your team.
Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your questions.
中文对照:早上好,我叫刘洋,很高兴来到这里。我2020年毕业于南京大学计算机专业,毕业后做了三年软件工程师,主要负责网页应用。上一份工作中,我带小团队重构了客服系统,响应时间缩短了30%。我喜欢解决问题、和人紧密合作。我申请这个岗位是因为它和我的技能及长期规划吻合,相信能为团队带来价值。谢谢时间,期待提问。
Hello, my name is ___ (你的名字). I am a ___ (职业/身份). In my free time, I enjoy ___ (爱好), because it helps me ___ (收获). I am good at ___ (一项能力), and I once ___ (一个小例子). Thank you for listening.
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Hello, my name is Chen Jie. I am an English teacher at a middle school. In my free time, I enjoy reading novels, because it keeps my mind open and improves my writing. I am good at explaining difficult ideas in simple words, and I once helped three shy students become confident speakers in one term. Thank you for listening.
要点:每一段只说一个意思,经历部分"做了什么 + 结果数字"最有说服力(helped three students / in one term)。
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
3. 简历要点
简历四块结构
| 个人信息 Contact | 姓名、电话、邮箱、所在城市(不放性别、年龄、照片除非当地习惯要求)。 |
| 求职意向/简介 Summary | 一两句话:X years of experience in ..., skilled in ... |
| 教育背景 Education | 学校、专业、起止时间、GPA(高的才写)。 |
| 工作经历 Experience | 每段用动词开头的 bullet:动作 + 做了什么 + 结果/数字。 |
| 技能 Skills | 语言、工具、证书,分条列。 |
范文片段:工作经历 bullet
Software Engineer · ABC Tech · 2022 – Present
- Built and maintained a customer dashboard used by 200+ clients every day.
- Reduced page load time by 40 percent through code optimization.
- Cooperated with designers and product managers to ship three new features.
中文对照:软件工程师 · ABC科技 · 2022至今。搭建并维护每日200多客户使用的客户看板;通过代码优化把页面加载时间缩短40%;与设计师、产品经理合作上线三个新功能。
"负责公司公众号的内容运营,半年里粉丝从 5000 涨到 12000。"
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Managed the company's official social media account, growing followers from 5,000 to 12,000 in six months.
要点:① 开头用动词过去/现在式 Managed;② 数字放最后做亮点(growing from ... to ... in six months);③ 不要写成 "I was responsible for ... and we got more followers" 这种流水句。
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
4. 日常小作文:邀请信 / 感谢信
日常书信三段式
| 开头段 | 问候 + 一句话说清写信目的:邀请 / 感谢。 |
| 中间段 | 邀请:时间地点安排;感谢:具体谢对方做了什么、你的感受。 |
| 结尾段 | 期待回复 / 再次感谢 + 落款。 |
范文一:邀请信
Dear Anna,
How are you? I am writing to invite you to my birthday party this Saturday evening.
The party will start at six o'clock at my home. We will have dinner, watch a movie, and play some games. Several of our old classmates are coming, so we can catch up.
I really hope you can make it. Please let me know by Thursday if you are free.
Yours,
Mei
中文对照:安娜你好吗?写信是想邀请你本周六晚来我的生日聚会。聚会六点在我家开始,我们会一起吃饭、看电影、玩游戏,几位老同学也会来,可以好好叙旧。真希望你能来,周四前告诉我你有没有空。你的,梅。
范文二:感谢信
Dear Uncle Wang,
I am writing to thank you for helping me during my job interview last week.
Your advice on answering questions was very useful, and I felt much more confident on that day. To my great joy, I got the offer this Monday!
I really appreciate your time and kindness. I would like to invite you to dinner to celebrate.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Ming
中文对照:王叔叔您好,写信是为了感谢您上周在我求职面试时给的帮助。您关于怎么回答问题的建议非常有用,当天我自信多了。让我高兴的是,周一我就拿到了 offer!真心感谢您的时间和好意,想请您吃饭庆祝。您的,小明。
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Dear Tom,
I am writing to thank you for helping me with my English while I was sick last week.
You spent an hour every evening explaining the lessons I missed, and I finally understood the grammar points that used to trouble me. Without your help, I would have fallen far behind.
Thank you again for your kindness. I owe you a big dinner!
Yours,
Li Hua
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
合上范文,假装同事让你教他"怎么写一封请假邮件"。你能把五段式一步步说出来吗?卡住的地方就是没真会。问自己三句:
- 用自己的话解释:邮件五段式每段各干啥?为什么主题行不能空着?
- 举个反例:"I have something to do" 为啥算中式英语?地道该怎么说?
- 哪里还说不清:简历 bullet 的"动词+结果数字"套路,你能不能给自己的真实经历套一条出来?套不出就回去看范文片段。
5. 通知 / 公告(Notice)
公司、学校、社团要贴个通知:开会、放假、活动变更。英文通知有固定格式,套模板就行。
All staff are requested to attend a brief meeting at 3:00 p.m. this Friday, in Meeting Room 3.
Agenda: the new schedule for next month.
Please be on time.
Admin Office May 20
通知 小练习
1.(套模板)用"Please note that..."写一句:请注意,明天下午的培训取消了。
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答案:Please note that tomorrow afternoon's training has been cancelled.解析:通知常用 Please note that... 开头,取消用现在完成时 has been cancelled 表已发生。自评:套出来 → 打勾;不会 → 回看通知格式四要素。
考试写作:初高中、四六级、剑桥风格段落
这一节对准应试:初高中的记叙文和书信,四六级的三段式(观点对比 / 问题解决 / 现象解释),以及剑桥、新概念风格的描写文和议论文段落。考试作文的诀窍不是词难,而是结构清楚 + 模板套用 + 不犯低级错误。
要上场考试了。阅卷老师几十秒看一篇,没时间欣赏你的文采——他看的是结构清不清楚、模板套没套、有没有低级错误。所以这一章别追求难词,把三段式模板背到肌肉记忆,考试时往里填内容就行。写完这章,下一站是"避坑清单",专治中式英语。
1. 初高中作文:记叙文与书信
记叙文结构
| 开头 | 交代时间、地点、人物、事件起因。 |
| 中间 | 事情经过,按时间顺序写,用 first / then / later / finally 连接。 |
| 结尾 | 结果 + 你的感受或学到了什么。 |
范文:一件难忘的事
Last summer, I went to a small village with my father to visit my grandparents. One morning, I decided to go fishing by myself near the river.
At first, I was so excited that I kept waiting for a fish to bite. However, half an hour passed and there was nothing. Later, an old farmer passed by and showed me how to sit quietly and choose the right place. Finally, I caught my first fish and felt very proud.
That day, I learned that patience and the right method are more important than luck.
中文对照:去年夏天我和父亲去小山村看爷爷奶奶。一天早上,我独自去河边钓鱼。起初我很兴奋,一直等鱼上钩;然而半小时过去一无所获。后来一位老农路过,教我安静等待、选对位置。终于我钓到了第一条鱼,非常自豪。那天我明白了:耐心和正确方法比运气更重要。
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Last May Day, my family went to the beach for the first time.
First, we walked along the sand and collected beautiful shells. Then, we swam in the sea and felt the waves push us up and down. Later, we enjoyed seafood together while watching the sunset. Finally, we took many photos before going home.
It was not only relaxing but also a precious memory for our whole family.
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
书信结构(初高中)
范文:给笔友的信
Dear John,
Thank you for your last letter. I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. My favorite subject is English, because my teacher always makes the classes lively and interesting. After class, I often play basketball with my friends, which keeps me healthy and happy.
What about your school life? Please write to me soon and tell me about yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
中文对照:约翰你好,谢谢你上封信,很高兴跟你聊聊我的校园生活。我周一到周五上学,最喜欢英语课,因为老师总把课上得生动有趣;课后常和朋友打篮球,让我健康又快乐。你的校园生活呢?快写信告诉我你的情况。你的,李华。
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Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I would like to share my favorite sport with you.
My favorite sport is running. I run in the park near my home three times a week, early in the morning. Running makes me energetic and helps me think clearly before a busy day.
If you come to China, let's go running together! Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
2. 四六级作文:三段式三种题型
四六级作文最稳的写法就是三段:第一段引出话题,第二段论述(原因/利弊/方法),第三段总结表态。下面三种题型各给模板和范文。
题型一:观点对比型
| 第一段 | 引出两种不同观点:When it comes to ..., people's opinions differ. Some believe ..., while others argue ... |
| 第二段 | 分别说理由:支持者理由 1-2 句;反对者理由 1-2 句。 |
| 第三段 | 你的看法 + 理由:As far as I am concerned, ... |
范文:线上学习好不好
When it comes to online learning, people's opinions differ greatly. Some believe it is convenient and affordable, while others worry that it lacks face-to-face interaction.
Supporters point out that online courses allow students to study anywhere and review lessons at their own pace. However, opponents argue that self-discipline is required, and many students may get distracted by games or social media.
As far as I am concerned, online learning is a useful tool, but it cannot completely replace traditional classrooms. The best way is to combine both.
中文对照:谈到线上学习,人们观点不一。有人认为它方便又便宜,有人担心缺乏面对面交流。支持者指出网课让学生随地学习、按自己节奏复习;反对者则认为这需要自律,很多学生会被游戏或社交软件分心。我认为线上学习是有用的工具,但不能完全替代传统课堂,最好是两者结合。
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When it comes to using smartphones at school, people hold different views. Some support it, while others are strongly against it.
Those who agree believe smartphones help students look up information and keep in touch with parents. However, opponents argue that phones distract students from listening in class and may encourage cheating.
In my opinion, students should not use smartphones during classes, but they may use them at breaks for safety and communication.
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
题型二:问题解决型
| 第一段 | 提出问题:Nowadays, ... has become a serious problem. It brings ... |
| 第二段 | 给 2-3 个解决办法:To solve this problem, we should first ..., Second, ... |
| 第三段 | 总结 + 展望:Only in this way can we ... |
范文:如何减少城市垃圾
Nowadays, rubbish sorting has become a serious problem in many cities. If it is not dealt with properly, it will pollute the environment and waste resources.
To solve this problem, several measures should be taken. First, the government should put more clear signs and bins in public places. Second, schools should teach students how to sort rubbish from an early age. Finally, we as citizens should form the habit of sorting before throwing things away.
Only in this way can we make our cities cleaner and more livable.
中文对照:如今,垃圾分类在很多城市成了一个严重问题。处理不当会污染环境、浪费资源。为解决这一问题,应采取几项措施:首先,政府应在公共场所设置更清晰的标识和垃圾桶;其次,学校应从小教学生垃圾分类;最后,我们作为市民应养成扔垃圾前分类的习惯。只有这样,我们才能让城市更干净宜居。
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Nowadays, food waste on campus is becoming a serious problem, and much food in the dining hall is thrown away every day.
To solve this problem, we should take action. First, the dining hall can offer smaller portions so that students can choose how much they want. Second, the school should hold activities to remind students not to order more than they can eat.
If everyone does a little, food waste will surely be reduced.
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
题型三:现象解释型
| 第一段 | 描述现象:In recent years, the phenomenon of ... has attracted wide attention. |
| 第二段 | 分析原因/影响:There are several reasons. For one thing, ... For another, ... |
| 第三段 | 总结/评价:In my view, ... |
范文:越来越多人晨练
In recent years, the number of people taking morning exercise in parks has been increasing steadily.
There are several reasons for this trend. For one thing, people are now more aware of the importance of health, especially after busy workdays. For another, public parks have been improved, making it convenient and pleasant to exercise outdoors. As a result, morning exercise has become part of many people's daily life.
In my view, this is a positive change, and we should encourage more people to keep the habit.
中文对照:近年来,在公园晨练的人越来越多。这一趋势有几个原因:其一,忙碌工作后,人们更意识到健康的重要性;其二,公园设施改善,户外锻炼更方便舒适。于是晨练成了很多人日常生活的一部分。我认为这是积极的变化,应鼓励更多人坚持。
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In recent years, keeping pets has become increasingly popular among young people.
There are several reasons behind this trend. For one thing, many young people live alone, and pets bring them company and reduce loneliness. For another, taking care of an animal teaches responsibility and helps them relax after work.
In my view, pets can make life warmer, but owners should also take responsibility and never abandon them.
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
3. 剑桥 / 新概念风格段落:描写文与议论文
这类考试不要求长作文,常要求写一段 80-120 词的段落。关键是句子长短错落、细节具体、有画面感或有论点,而不是堆模板。
描写文段落(My Favorite Place)
My favorite place is a small park near my home. It is not large, but it feels warm and peaceful. In the morning, old people do tai chi under the tall trees, and the air smells of fresh grass. In the evening, children run around the benches while their parents talk quietly. When I feel stressed, I sit on the old wooden bench, watch the sunset, and forget my troubles for a while.
中文对照:我最喜欢的地方是家附近的小公园。它不大,却温暖宁静。清晨老人在大树下打太极,空气里飘着青草香;傍晚孩子们绕着长椅奔跑,父母轻声聊天。压力大时,我坐在那把旧木凳上看日落,烦恼暂时烟消云散。
议论文段落(Should we keep old buildings?)
In my opinion, old buildings should be protected instead of being pulled down. To begin with, they carry the history and memory of a city, and without them, the city loses its own character. Besides, many old buildings are beautiful and can attract tourists, which is good for the local economy. Of course, safety problems must be fixed, but the answer is to repair, not to replace, them with glass towers.
中文对照:我认为老建筑应该保护,而不是被拆除。首先,它们承载着一座城市的历史与记忆,没有它们,城市就失去了自己的特色。此外,许多老建筑很美,能吸引游客,有利于当地经济。当然安全问题必须修缮,但办法是修复,而不是用玻璃高楼取而代之。
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A place I love is the old bookstore on Green Street. It is small and quiet, with wooden shelves full of second-hand books. In the afternoon, sunlight comes through the window and falls on the pages, while soft music plays in the background. I like to sit in the corner with a cup of coffee, lose myself in a story, and forget about time.
自评:自己写的和范文对得上结构 → 过;缺主题句/没连接词/有中式英语 → 对着范文那句改,别抄完就扔。
想象你是阅卷老师,拿到一篇三段式作文,你会先看哪三行?讲清楚"阅卷人在找什么",你写的时候自然就知道该往哪儿使劲。问自己三句:
- 用自己的话解释:四六级三段式,开头/中间/结尾各完成什么任务?用大白话讲。
- 举个反例:现象解释型作文,如果第二段只摆现象不分析原因,会丢分丢在哪?
- 哪里还说不清:三种题型里,哪种你还背不出模板?把它的模板段抄三遍直到能默写。
4. 图表作文:把一张图写成三段
四六级、雅思小作文常让你描述一张图表(线图、柱状图、饼图)。它不靠观点,靠"把数据说清楚",有固定套路,三段就够。
图表作文 小练习
1.(选词)The number ___ (increase) by 20% last year. 该用 increased 还是 increases?
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答案:increased(图表讲过去的数据,用过去式;by 20% 表示涨了20%这个幅度)。自评:选对 → 打勾;错了 → 记住图表用过去式、by 表幅度。
常见错误:中式英语避坑清单
下面这些句子,中国人写出来"看着对",老外一看就皱眉。每一行是:错句(红)→ 正确写法 → 为什么错。写之前扫一眼,写完之后对照自查,能避开大部分低级失分点。
模板会套了,最后一关是别在阴沟里翻船。下面 18 条全是中国人高频翻车现场——不是你英语差,是中文习惯偷偷跑进英文里。把它当"交卷前的最后一遍检查",扫一眼,至少能捞回两三分。
| 错句 | 正确写法 | 为什么错 |
|---|---|---|
| I very like it. | I like it very much. | very 是副词,不能直接修饰动词,要放句末用 very much。 |
| I have something to do. | I'm busy. / I have plans. | 中式"我有事"直译,英文听起来像"我有东西要做",含糊不清。 |
| Give you. | Here you are. / Here. | "给你"不能直译成 Give you,递东西用 Here you are。 |
| Although he is rich, but he is unhappy. | Although he is rich, he is unhappy. | although 和 but 都是连词,中文"虽然…但是…"成对,英文只能留一个。 |
| He suggested me to go. | He advised me to go. / He suggested that I go. | suggest 不能接 sb to do;advise 才可以。 |
| My brother is more taller than me. | My brother is taller than me. | 比较级 -er 已经表"更",不能再加 more,两者不叠用。 |
| I am boring. | I am bored. | -ing 形容"令人…"(东西让人无聊),-ed 形容"感到…"(人感到无聊)。 |
| He has left for three days. | He has been away for three days. | leave 是瞬间动作,不能和 for + 一段时间连用;要换成 be away。 |
| I have a good news to tell you. | I have good news to tell you. | news 是不可数名词,不能加 a/an。 |
| He married with a nurse. | He married a nurse. | marry 是及物动词,直接接宾语,不加 with。 |
| The price is expensive. | The price is high. / The product is expensive. | price(价格)用 high/low 形容;expensive 形容东西本身贵。 |
| I am graduate from the college. | I graduated from the college. | graduate 是动词,不能加 am 当形容词用。 |
| Welcome you to our school. | Welcome to our school. | welcome 直接加地点,不接 you to;"欢迎你…"在英文里不这么说。 |
| He said me that he was tired. | He told me that he was tired. | say 不能接人作宾语;"告诉某人"要用 tell sb that。 |
| My hometown has taken place great changes. | Great changes have taken place in my hometown. | take place 的主语是"变化"本身,不是"家乡"。 |
| The reason is because I was ill. | The reason is that I was ill. | the reason is 已经带原因,because 语义重复,用 that 引导。 |
| I very agree with you. | I quite agree with you. / I agree with you completely. | very 不能修饰动词 agree;用 quite / completely 等。 |
| There are many people are playing basketball. | There are many people playing basketball. | 一个简单句不能有两个谓语动词 are;用现在分词 playing 作定语。 |
① 句子层面:每句话先找主语和动词,确认主谓一致、时态统一,没有"一句两动词"。
② 段落层面:一段是不是"主题句 + 2-3 句支撑 + 结论句"?句子之间有没有连接词?
③ 中式英语:把上面 18 条对着查一遍,尤其 very 修饰动词、although/but 连用、瞬间动词加 for 这三个重灾区。
把自己当成"纠错老师",随便挑三条错句,说出它错在哪、正确怎么写。能挑错,比会写更说明你真懂。问自己三句:
- 用自己的话解释:为什么 "I very like it" 不对?very 到底能修饰谁?
- 举个反例:Although 和 but 为啥不能同框?中文"虽然…但是…"在英文里为什么只能留一个?
- 哪里还说不清:18 条里哪条你只是眼熟、说不出道理?把那条的"为什么错"读三遍,并用它自己再造一个对句。
雅思写作 Task 1 · 图表写作(Graphic Writing)
Task 1 给你一张图(柱状、折线、饼图、表格或流程图),要求用 至少 150 词 把图里的信息写清楚。三条铁律:① 客观描述——只说"图里有什么",不发表个人观点;② 时态要跟图对应(讲过去的数据用过去时);③ 挑最值、最明显的变化写,别把每个数都抄一遍。
论审题先问三件事
是什么:Task 1 不是让你"评论",而是当翻译官——把视觉信息翻成文字。动笔前先定:① 图的类型(柱/线/饼/表);② 单位与时间(是"小时""百分比"还是"人数",是 2020 年还是每天);③ 总体趋势(涨、跌、还是基本持平)。这三件事决定了你的开头段写什么。
怎么写:三段式最稳——第一段概述(图是什么 + 总体趋势),第二段抓重点(最高/最低/变化最大的两三个数),第三段收尾(一句话总结或点出最突出的对比)。描述变化用什么动词?上升 rise / increase / go up / peak;下降 fall / drop / decline;波动 fluctuate;占比 account for / make up。
图表一 · 柱状图(Bar Chart)
图表二 · 折线图(Line Chart)
图表三 · 饼图(Pie Chart)
范文 · 柱状图(约 155 词,关键句可朗读)
题目回放:The chart below shows average weekly reading hours for four age groups in 2020.
The bar chart compares the average number of hours that people in four age groups spent reading each week in 2020.
Overall, the youngest group read the most, while the 31-to-45 age group read the least.
Teenagers under 18 spent six hours per week reading, which was twice as long as the 31–45 age group at three hours. The 46-and-over group read for about five hours, and people aged 18–30 read for four hours.
In conclusion, reading time declined from the teenage years to the thirties, then rose slightly among older readers.
中文对照:柱状图对比了 2020 年四个年龄段人群每周的平均阅读时长。总体而言,最年轻组读得最多,31–45 岁组最少。18 岁以下青少年每周读 6 小时,是 31–45 岁组(3 小时)的两倍。46 岁以上读约 5 小时,18–30 岁读 4 小时。总之,阅读时间从青少年期到三十多岁下降,老年组略有回升。
① 客观:全文有没有冒出 I think / should / good 这类观点词?有就删。
② 数字:时态对不对(过去数据用过去时)、by 与 to 有没有混用?
③ 结构:是不是"概述→抓最值→收尾"三段?有没有把图的类型、对象、时间在第一句交代清?
雅思写作 Task 2 · 议论文(Essay)
Task 2 给你一个观点或现象,要求写 至少 250 词 的议论文。它考的不是"你的真想法",而是"你能不能把一种立场说圆、逻辑清楚、连接自然"。四种常考题型各有一套结构模板,审完题先认题型,再套对应模板。
论议论文通用骨架
开头段:改写题目(别照抄)+ 亮明立场或文章结构。主体两段:每段一个中心论点,用"主题句 → 解释 → 例子"展开。结尾段:重申立场或总结,不引入新观点。连接词(First / However / Therefore)是评分的"连贯与衔接"项,必须出现。
题型一 · Opinion(同意 / 不同意)
| 真题式 prompt | Some people believe universities should focus on employability skills rather than academic knowledge. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
| 开头段 | 改写题目 + 亮明立场:I completely agree that practical skills deserve more attention. |
| 主体段 1 | 论点一 + 解释 + 例子:First, graduates with hands-on skills find jobs more easily in a changing market. |
| 主体段 2 | 论点二(可让步):Furthermore, academic knowledge alone may fail to meet real workplace needs. |
| 结尾段 | 重申立场:In conclusion, I firmly believe employability should be a key goal of higher education. |
- 开头有没有明确表态(agree / disagree 二选一,别两边都讨好)?
- 两段主体是不是各自一个论点,没有跑题或重复?
- 有没有连接词(First / Furthermore / However)?
- 结尾有没有重申立场,而不是抛出新观点?
题型二 · Discussion(讨论双方)
| 真题式 prompt | Some think parents should teach children to be good citizens; others believe school is the best place. Discuss both views and give your opinion. |
| 开头段 | 引出双方 + 你的倾向:People hold different views on who should teach social values to children. |
| 主体段 1 | 一方观点 + 理由:On the one hand, parents shape a child's values from an early age at home. |
| 主体段 2 | 另一方 + 理由:On the other hand, schools provide a structured environment for social learning. |
| 结尾段 | 你的观点:In my view, both the family and the school share this responsibility. |
- 题目要求的双方是不是都讨论了,没有偏废?
- 有没有用 On the one hand / On the other hand 清晰分边?
- 结尾有没有给出自己的观点(题目明确要求 give your opinion)?
题型三 · Problem–Solution(问题 + 解决)
| 真题式 prompt | In many cities traffic congestion has become a serious problem. What are the causes, and what measures could solve it? |
| 开头段 | 提出问题 + 影响:Traffic jams now waste time and harm the environment in large cities. |
| 主体段 1 | 原因:The main cause is the rapid increase in private car ownership. |
| 主体段 2 | 解决办法:A practical solution is to improve public transport and charge congestion fees. |
| 结尾段 | 总结:Only by combining better services with clear policies can the problem be eased. |
- 原因和解决办法是不是一一对应(每个原因都有对策)?
- 办法是不是具体(如"改善公交 + 拥堵费"),而不是空喊"政府应该重视"?
- 结尾有没有用 Only by ... can ... 这类强调句收束?
题型四 · Advantages–Disadvantages(利弊)
| 真题式 prompt | Some countries encourage young people to take a gap year before university. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? |
| 开头段 | 改写题目 + 立场(利大于弊):Taking a year off can bring more benefits than drawbacks if planned well. |
| 主体段 1 | 利:The main advantage is that students gain maturity and real-world experience. |
| 主体段 2 | 弊:A possible disadvantage is that some may lose the habit of studying. |
| 结尾段 | 平衡/重申:On balance, the benefits of a gap year are greater when it is well organized. |
- 利和弊是不是都写到了,而且篇幅均衡?
- 开头表的态度( outweigh / not outweigh )和结尾是否一致?
- 有没有用 On balance / Overall 作权衡收尾?